come back when you’re refreshed!READERReport 2004-09-13 22:20:27Bug eyed is what reading your stories has done to me.there is nothing wrong with the content, but the way you structure your stories needs alot of work.READERReport 2004-09-13 19:51:32Great Story..I love the way you introduce more characters even if is just for a short time.. This part is rated lower than Part II ?? Desi xxx By the time this is over i’m gonna guess there like 6-7 people living in the house in a constant orgy.. tell me what you thinkREADERReport 2004-09-15 19:49:22john… So i feel that longer stories are rated higher than they should be. there’s only so much you can do. This part is rated lower than Part II ?? I don’t mean to hype it or anything, I am just wondering why the latest ones aren’t getting as many hits as the early ones have, i think most people wont read later in the series…so
