I still rate it a positive it kept my interest, reading through to the end.delarosa.Report 2008-06-12 14:23:31great fuckin story. Desi sex ID SHOOT WHOEVER FUCKED IN MY BAK YARD«12345» A story about sex,yes, but not the least bit sexy. HE WAS PISSED OFF, WHO CUD BLAME HIM? ID SHOOT WHOEVER FUCKED IN MY BAK YARD«12345» A lot of dialogue, character development, not really very sexually charged in my opinion. ID SHOOT WHOEVER FUCKED IN MY BAK YARD«12345» 43 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2008-11-21 21:52:38unusual story for this site. A story about sex,yes, but not the least bit sexy. A lot of dialogue, character development, not really very sexually charged in my opinion. she was a hoe and i turned her into a better one hahahaa seriously i give it 15/10 keep em comin lolAnonymous readerReport 2008-05-19 02:42:00good story i live in michigan a city called allen park just outside taylor and i tell u what the city is
