But compared to most of the stories on here that REALLY need to use the spell check, I’d say this was better than most. I liked the detail and the way you presented it. Desi xxx Only a few spots where you should have used the spell check before submitting. But compared to most of the stories on here that REALLY need to use the spell check, I’d say this was better than most. Good Work. 23 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-24 13:56:11now he needs to fuck his other daughter and get both girls pregnant with daddy’s babyAnonymous readerReport 2008-10-06 23:32:23Get her pregnant.READERReport 2008-04-15 09:09:57This is a very well written story that I have read a number of times. But compared to most of the stories on here that REALLY need to use the spell check, I’d say this was better than most.
