This doesn’t make it bad, of course; on the contrary, you’ve giving readers what they want up front, and more likely than not they’ll appreciate it. Desi xxx Put it in a lineup with similar stories and it would blend right in, as there’s not much in the way of a plot or characterization. This doesn’t make it bad, of course; on the contrary, you’ve giving readers what they want up front, and more likely than not they’ll appreciate it. The story is not bad, but there’s not much remarkable about it. Put it in a lineup with similar stories and it would blend right in, as there’s not much in the way of a plot or characterization. 4 comments«1»Doozy woof HunterReport 2021-06-19 23:12:41pretty good and well written!BlackRoninReport 2012-07-24 02:49:32Hey, congrats on the first story; it’s really gratifying to be expressing yourself in a public forum, isn’t it?
