Terrificly written. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. Xxx Terrificly written. Terrificly written. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. However. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. Terrificly written. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. However. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. However. However. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Terrificly written. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? Very few spelling and punctuation errors. However. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy.
