The poor form relegates this story to ash heap of shitty porn stories.READERReport 2004-07-16 04:38:29i think that that story was a bit too forward and un-natural, and yeah, i agree, needs more deatil.READERReport 2004-07-15 17:22:23I thought this story was OK. Desi sex Who enjoys watching grainy quality pornos ? 4 comments«1»READERReport 2004-07-17 23:39:27Where is the elaboration? A story is supposed to create a picture, until you barely realize you’re reading anymore and you feel like you’re there, watching what’s going on. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2004-07-17 23:39:27Where is the elaboration? People who don’t edit their stories before posting them are assuming that their audience are as moronic and sloppy as what they are. it was short and the plot barely exists at all. it was short and the plot barely exists at all.
