The foreplay could give an opportunity to not only describe these feelings, but also lengthen the story. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-26 22:15:01A GOOD STORY YOU COULD HAVE GONE INTO MORE DEPTH IN THIER LOVE MAKING KEEP TRYINGthesilent1Report 2013-03-05 18:38:51Well, I had enjoyed reading your first shared story on here. Desi xxx This isn’t a graphic story, it’s a romantic story. This isn’t a graphic story, it’s a romantic story. Being more graphic would detract from the romance. I very much like it the way it is. I like your style. I would have liked it if you were more descriptive of Claire and Dean’s feelings about what was happening to themselves and their thoughts about what their partner might be feeling. Anon reader did said some good key points about it. I like how the story flowed in the beginning, but I felt it was a little rushed toward to end.
