🙂 now… Let me if I may, give some constructive critisism? Xxx You don’t have to have all the answers, but you do have to address the question. Let me if I may, give some constructive critisism? What do they do when they aren’t having sex with each other? Where do they live? And why are they attracted to each other. and if people can’t bother to sign in ,then their comments should not be taken to heart.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 02:28:11ok, I liked the story. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 01:11:29Very good I must say!anonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 08:48:10Did you ever hear of the six questions that a newspaper article should answer – who, what, where, when, how and why? Let me if I may, give some constructive critisism? Where do they live? Doing so adds to the atmosphere, adds background and detail that makes a story interesting and not just a clinical description of some random
